Sunday, July 15, 2007

my jacket


Chiti kudi sir!
one KR puram- I gave him 10 rupees and said. The conductor was sober... Actually I found him sober because he didn't ask me back "Enno??,Dus rupaya mein tereko pura KR puram chahiye??.
uff the traffic in bangalore is increasing day by day like Himesh Reshamiya's emotional songs. You have to face, you just can’t ignore as all the channels into a unspoken competition to play his songs You are just a helpless spectator..
After standing a long 5 minutes I finally got a seat when the bus halted at a stop...I put my jacket off and kept on my lap...aah what a relax. .The traffic inside the bus and outside the bus was awesome.. Thank god now I can go aaram se till KR Puram..
A small girl age of 3-4 years was standing near to me with her mother. Both were well dressed, Girl was so cute and she has smiling eyes. I gave her a nice half open smile and looked outside of the bus. I have a very bad(?) habit of reading sign boards when I travel in a bus or car, where I am not driving.
“Excuse me baya (bhaiya) “ her mother said with a big colgate smile.
Yes – I said with an attitude that I can’t leave the seat for you now.
“choti bachhi ko asthama hee(hain) baya..manje maloom whitefield mein accha doctor rehti so(rehta hain),bachhi ko waha tak godi mein bethaleko baya” she merely said in a Shivaji Nagar accent.
I showed I have a bag and a jacket.. How can I…….
“Kya bi ni hota,bag aur jacket manje de dalo”
I gave my bag and the jacket to her and “ bachhi ko bethaliya sath mein.”
After some time she got a seat in the third row from my seat.. I was not having any problem with the little girl so I did not tell anything to her mother.
Uff another half an hour to reach KR puram.. Crowd was still same in bus arre channe ke tarah pakk gaya hu yarr..ye log kab utrenge???
“Whitefield whitefield” the bus conductor loaded his voice.
Most of the crowd got down at whitefield stoppage..but where is she??? I could not found that lady inside the bus. I was scared...then a huge lady who was seating near to the most wanted lady at that time for me came to me and said “thanks appa,has she irritated you?”
Magu navu illi iliona......( come child we will get down here).She pulled her child from my lap.

I was speechless just wondering why this lady telling thank you and asking the girl to come with her. I could not make out what exactly was happening.
“we will get down here, that lady was so sweet the place was very congested where I was seated she only came to me and helped me”
She said very confidently and got down from the bus.

9 comments:

hansie said...
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priyanka said...

qiute a humorous way to xprs a sensible thght

RIKI said...

Hay man......did that happen to you. Mammu bana diya.....chalta hai....so sad off that...HA HA HA HA......kidding....those lines were good and the way off putting those line was really kool....the most funny line I liked was """"uff the traffic in bangalore is increasing day by day like Himesh Reshamiya's emotional songs. You have to face, you just can’t ignore as all the channels into a unspoken competition to play his songs You are just a helpless spectator..""""""KOOL Man. why Himesh Reshamiya is there in every part off the LIFE... that’s ?????’s MAN….

abha said...

hey I liked the story a lot.At first I thought what stupid name is this jacket.I will read small part and will leave it ,But when I started reading this real story,I cant resist reading till the end.heee.
Its great ....heeee.

abhishek said...

GOOD GOOD...LIKE D WAY U'VE EXPRESSED N EXPLAINED D INCIDENT...BUT D FACT IS D LADY RECOGNISED N REALISED FINALLY DAT C FOUND D PERFECT FATHER 4 HER BABY, DTAS Y C DID SO 2 U.....HEHHEHEHE AAPNE RAKKHA APNA SAMMAN,JAHAN BHI JAATE HAIN AAP,BOLTE HAIN SAB ABBAJAN ABBAJAN...HHUUUU HAHAH

Rishi_blogger said...

this means...life mein kabhi kabhi "k*l@" hota hein....hehehehe....good start man...keep going....

parashar said...

did that actually happen?...the climax and plot reminds me of o'henry short stories
good going and keep blogging

abha said...

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Dan* said...

whew what a relieve for you then :D

nice one again ........

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